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Mess Me Up by Lani Lynn Vale | Book Review

Sep. 04, 2018


Mess Me Up by Lani Lynn Vale | Book Reviewfive-stars
Mess Me Up by Lani Lynn Vale
Series: Bear Bottom Guardians MC #1
Genres: MC Romance, Romantic Suspense

When Rome Pierce moved to Bear Bottom, Texas, it was his intention to lay low. To not be seen. To find a way to heal his body and soul—as well as his son’s.

Nobody would know by looking at him that he used to play professional football. Not with the Bare Bottom MC cut covering his back, and definitely not with his friendly smile completely obliterated.

No longer is there charm in each smooth word that comes out of his mouth. What’s left is an angry, bitter, scared man that’s terrified one day he’s going to wake up and his entire world is going to be gone.

Nobody knows what drove him to leave the game he loved—nobody but her.

She’s the one person that has helped him make it through the dark days and even darker nights. She’s the bright and shining star in his pitch-black sky.

And he doesn’t even know her name.

He should be afraid that she knows things that not anyone—not even his best friend—knows.

Yet, with each encounter, he gives what little bit of his soul remains, and before he knows it only two people on this earth—one dying, and one too afraid to live—make his life worth living.

Until one day he has to choose—the love of his life, or the life he brought into this world.

Two impossible situations. One decision that would change him forever.

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In this series: Trash Talkin', How About No, Snitches Get Stitches , F-Bomb
Other books from this Author Hail Mary , Quit Your Pitchin', Too Bad So Sad, Trash Talkin', Listen Pitch

I received this book for free from in exchange for an honest review. This does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of my review.

Talk about Mess Me Up! This book certainly did that, it could not have been a better title. I am pretty sure I cried through the first half, maybe more. I knew that this would be emotional since Rome’s son was sick but I didn’t know just how much it would gut me. Rome was as strong as a parent could be under the circumstances. He did everything he could to fight for his son. When his ex-wife left their son in his care, he stepped right up. When his son asked for Izzy to come clean the house because she brought him cookies Rome called right away.

Izzy was everything that Rome needed. She was strong when he couldn’t be and the light that pulled him back from the darkness. She hasn’t had the best of relationships with her family nor her ex. She is just trying to make her life better and live her life. She loves Ty-Ty (Rome’s son) and feels so much for what he is going through. She also loves Rome even when he doesn’t want her to.

This was a powerful start to Bear Bottom Guardians MC and I am more than certain that every other book in the series will surpass the standard that Lani Lynn Vale has set with this one. Once again she takes us a journey of love and second chances.

Rome

RP’s Biggest Fan,

I’m not sure how you became my therapist, or how we even got to the point of being pen pals, but I’ll take what I can get.

I could use a friend.

So, you want to hear about my life? How it’s nowhere near as glamorous as everyone makes it out to be?

Where should I start?

How about the paparazzi. They’re awful. They follow me home. They follow me to work. They follow me to my son’s appointments—though technically, they don’t know he’s my son. Luckily. That was one thing I did manage to do right—keeping him out of the limelight.

Lucky for me, too. Or, at least for him.

And if the paparazzi wasn’t bad enough, my ex was only with me for my money—because she knew that I had it.

If there was one thing I could erase from my life, it would be her.

But, if it wasn’t for her, I wouldn’t have my son…and at this point, he’s the single bright light in the sea of darkness that is my life.

Last week she threatened to sue me because I broke the custody agreement we have for our son. Do you want to know what I did? Nothing. Not one damn thing. I stayed at her house while she went away for the day, and I put a drink on her coffee table.

Let me repeat that…I put a drink on her coffee table.

Ok, so it was a Coke can, and I didn’t use a coaster… but I’d finished the damn thing. It was completely empty, it wasn’t sweating, and it didn’t leave any sort of mark.

But, with the way she reacted, you would’ve thought that I’d carved my initials in the table using a screwdriver or something.

Oh, and let’s not forget what my team manager wants me to do.

He wants me to pose naked except for a strategically positioned football for Sports Illustrated.  When did Sports Illustrated stop focusing on sports in favor of selling what’s sexy?

You told me last week that you weren’t sure that you were going to write anymore. I realize that this back and forth we have going on isn’t normal, but if it doesn’t bother you, it doesn’t bother me.

I hope you write to me soon, RP’s Biggest Fan.

Rome.

five-stars

About Lani Lynn Vale

Lani Lynn Vale is a USA Today Bestselling Author of over thirty titles. She is married with three children, two dogs, two cats, a donkey, and a couple (a couple also meaning over twenty) chickens.

When she’s not writing, you can find her curled up in her favorite chair reading.

Lani is married with three children, and lives in the Great State of Texas.

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Comments

  1. Dana Rodriguez says

    September 7, 2018 at 9:08 pm

    The cover alone caught my interest. This sounds like a great book!

    Reply
    • Rita says

      September 8, 2018 at 12:10 pm

      The cover is great and the book is even better.

      Reply
  2. bn100 says

    September 8, 2018 at 11:02 am

    interesting club name

    Reply
    • Rita says

      September 8, 2018 at 12:10 pm

      It is, they were part of the Dixie Wardens MC but decided to change their name.

      Reply
  3. Mary Beth Elderton says

    November 11, 2018 at 11:40 am

    This sounds like a wild read. Love the names!

    Reply
  4. Rosie says

    December 6, 2019 at 1:48 pm

    Wow, this sounds good. I know it will make me cry, too, but it must be strong to draw you in like that.

    Reply
  5. Kelly Kimmell says

    April 17, 2020 at 10:42 am

    The cover is great, fantastic review and good excerpt.

    Reply
  6. Lisa G says

    July 16, 2020 at 8:13 am

    I did not get to read it

    Reply
  7. Maria Malaveci says

    December 16, 2020 at 8:00 am

    Love the review and can’t wait to read the series!

    Reply
  8. megan allen says

    January 21, 2021 at 5:54 pm

    I love starting a new series!! I think this would be one I would love!

    Reply
  9. Judy Thomas says

    December 3, 2021 at 5:38 am

    I love books with tough tattooed bikers that have issues! They aalways make for great reading.

    Reply
  10. Eva Millien says

    May 11, 2022 at 10:32 am

    Mess Me Up sounds like a great mc book, thanks for sharing your review and have a wonderful day!

    Reply
  11. Piroska says

    July 27, 2022 at 6:20 pm

    Thanks for the great review and excerpt. The book sounds amazing. Love the cover!

    Reply
  12. Bea LaRocca says

    September 17, 2022 at 9:03 pm

    Thank you for sharing your review of Mess Me Up, this sounds like a must read for me

    Reply
  13. Dreaa Drake says

    March 24, 2023 at 8:53 pm

    You must love this author i see her on your reviews alot! I just grabbed one of heR books so Thanks for the reC!

    Reply
  14. Elizabeth says

    July 12, 2023 at 11:50 am

    It sounds pretty intense!

    Reply
  15. Sherry says

    February 2, 2024 at 2:21 am

    I love the cover and the name of the town.

    Reply
  16. heather says

    February 2, 2024 at 4:50 pm

    I would so like to read this one sounds super good and I like the cover except for the beard.

    Reply
  17. mami2jcn says

    February 3, 2024 at 8:30 am

    The author has some great titles. I like “Quit Your Pitchin'”.

    Reply
  18. Marisela Zuniga says

    February 7, 2024 at 10:14 pm

    The cover looks great, love it!! Thanks for sharing your thoughts on the book.

    Reply
  19. Athena Graeme says

    February 16, 2024 at 7:05 am

    I like the guardian aspect, anytime a guy is protective it’s hot. But again with the whole Texas thing. I don’t get it. I am super sick of books based in Texas. Ready for a new location.

    Reply
  20. Sara Zielinski says

    February 16, 2024 at 12:30 pm

    Amazing book

    Reply
  21. Chelsea S says

    February 16, 2024 at 2:27 pm

    The cover and title looks cool.

    Reply
  22. Elaine G says

    February 18, 2024 at 8:02 pm

    Thanks for sharing the excerpt and your thoughts on the book, It sounds like a good one.

    Reply
  23. Madonna says

    February 19, 2024 at 9:51 pm

    Wow thats a powerful excerpt. Certainly designed to get your interest.

    Reply
  24. Adriane says

    February 20, 2024 at 6:40 am

    Glad you enjoyed it. Looks too rough for me

    Reply
  25. kelly tupick says

    February 21, 2024 at 8:47 am

    This sounds like it would keep you on your toes.

    Reply
  26. Anita L says

    February 22, 2024 at 8:16 am

    Love the cover and the book sounds great!

    Reply
  27. Merle says

    February 23, 2024 at 9:43 am

    nice cover

    Reply
  28. Maria Fernanda Dória Ribeiro says

    February 24, 2024 at 9:19 am

    Sounds interesting! I loved the excerpt

    Reply
  29. Jenny Ham says

    February 25, 2024 at 6:17 am

    I love the cover the review sounds great as well thanks for sharing.

    Reply
  30. Dreaa Drake says

    February 26, 2024 at 12:37 am

    All of her books sounds really good I’m definitely going to have to read one asap!

    Reply
  31. Dreaa Drake says

    February 26, 2024 at 1:23 am

    This sounds like a great book def adding to my tbr!

    Reply
  32. Andy says

    February 26, 2024 at 3:24 am

    sound great book

    Reply
  33. Athena Graeme says

    February 26, 2024 at 7:39 am

    Not sure I’m ready for a book that’s going to evoke so much emotion! I love the tough guys that are softies for their loves though! That is a spectacular cover.

    Reply
  34. jason jennings says

    February 26, 2024 at 7:42 pm

    sound like a good book to read

    Reply
  35. Jessica Beard says

    February 26, 2024 at 10:36 pm

    Wow this looks like an intense book. I’ll check it out.

    Reply
  36. heather says

    April 2, 2024 at 8:33 am

    Sounds like there is a lot going on in this book and I like that.

    Reply
  37. Bea LaRocca says

    April 5, 2024 at 2:44 pm

    Over the years I have read so many of your awesome reviews of Lani Lynn Vale’s stories and I have yet to read her work. Mess Me Up sounds like a great book to start with!

    Reply
  38. Sherry says

    April 6, 2024 at 4:55 am

    I love the cover. I use to read her books but somehow I quit.

    Reply
  39. mami2jcn says

    April 9, 2024 at 6:09 am

    I have a friend who’s really into tattooed bikers and she would go crazy over this book cover.

    Reply
  40. Barbara Montag says

    April 12, 2024 at 11:10 am

    I love this masculine cover!

    Reply
  41. Athena Graeme says

    April 14, 2024 at 7:12 am

    Izzy and Rome, nice couple names! I love when there is a kid involved. Still not a fan of things set in Texas, but it still sounds good.

    Reply
  42. Natalie says

    April 21, 2024 at 6:28 pm

    You cannot beat 5/5 stars! Sounds like a good read!

    Reply
  43. Sara Zielinski says

    April 23, 2024 at 1:32 pm

    Wow this book sounds cool

    Reply
  44. MICHAEL A LAW says

    April 23, 2024 at 1:59 pm

    This looks like a great read. Thanks for sharing.

    Reply
  45. Nancy says

    April 23, 2024 at 4:56 pm

    Sounds intriguing

    Reply
  46. Jon Heil says

    April 23, 2024 at 11:25 pm

    Battle is going down!

    Reply
  47. Anita L says

    April 24, 2024 at 7:28 am

    Nice cover and sounds good!

    Reply
  48. jason jennings says

    April 26, 2024 at 6:49 pm

    sounds likee a good book

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